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You have to be kidding me!

Dude, get a band. Seriously. Just be a rock star already.

But for real, this song is excellent. I'd just work on the guitar that comes in in the middle; it doesn't sound like it fits in quite right (but it's not your fault; it's the damn FL studio). Other than that, though - I have respect for you. Damn.

wyldfyre1 responds:

LOL its funny people keep saying that but i LOOOVE how it sounds with the piano. maybe its just me eh? =) I'll have to look into it.. This song has gone through MANY transitions .. I've worked on it soo much and am not done with it.. Wont be till i get the right sound i want from it!

haha THANKS for the great review man seriously!

Strange song

The bassline says it all; I liked the intro and wah-wahs in the middle, too. Peace.

wyldfyre1 responds:

hah yeah. needless to say this song was written when i was in a strange mood so the strange creature came out hahah!

Super Cool

I liked everything except the drums; the drums sounded like the club basic template in FL, but everything else in here was awesome. Even the song structure, which I am super deficient in, is excellent. You change up melodies and stuff; it's like an instrumental pop song. How do you do it?

wyldfyre1 responds:

Just flows man. I sit down..and write.. and go with what goes through me. Yeah when i wrote the drums i kinda thought it sounded wrong too but i had some trouble writing the drums so I put something in generec (Spelling? LOL) for the moment so that people would get the idea on what i wanted. I'll end up changing it up some. Thanks for the review homie!

Love that piano

Awesome beat. I'd just make the drums a tad bit louder; then that would be a flawless beat. Peace. (new beats)

Greeksta-69 responds:

Thanks man, thats a good idea ill try it out and il check some of your beats out in a min.
Thanks once again.

Greeksta

Intro is awesome!

I agree with pretty much everything G-Styles said: the intro is awesome, but the synth doesn't fit too well. The chorus isn't working, but the verse is excellent. That weird pluck/pizzicato is cool; just lower the volume on it. Good beat; peace. (new beats; check 'em)

Greeksta-69 responds:

I know the chorus dosent work but i wanted it to sound diverse so i put it down an octave first then up and octabe on the synth. Thanks for the review.

Greeksta

Huh.

Why's there a crackle sound? Did you sample this off an old record, or did you just add a fake crackle sound? Either way, it's pretty cool. Peace. (new beats)

Pandoryk responds:

The crackle sound isn't something I wanted, but I found it cool and adapted and keep it for the loop ^^
Thx for the review dude! =D

Damn.

That is a good ass beat. All I can say. Peace.
- Phorus (some new beats)

By the way, how do you get 64 reviews?! That's just insane.

Greeksta-69 responds:

I have like 85 now lmao, thanks :)

Insane

That beat is insane. I normally never say something's perfect, but I don't think that beat could be touched. Insane. Peace.
- Phorus (New Beats)

Not bad

Cool beat - I mostly like the high-pitched synth in the chorus; reminds me of old movies. The melody is nice, too. Maybe for another song, you could try a different emotional range or something, since a lot of your stuff sounds angry. Try something melancholy, or sad, or free-wheeling; I don't know. You have some talent, and you might want to try other stuff - never know when you'll hit a real chord with something. Nice beat.

Interesting

The melody would've been cool, but you used bells, which don't really carry the melody well. It's more of a sound effect than a song, but still interesting. Not trying to be hard on it, but that's a little too avant-garde for me.

Pandoryk responds:

Wow! a little too avant-garde, that's a very nice compliment! Thank you very much!

I do music because I'm bored.

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