phosphorusprocedure's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[R.M.P.- Pop Bottles]

Damn.

That's all I can say. Damn.

[Chrono Trigger Hip Hop Remix]

Damn

I love the keyboard sounds; kinda like A Tribe Called Quest. Strings are pretty cool, too. Nice beat. Peace.
- Ph. (new beats, but not the one I sent you)

TheGameReapa responds:

thanks, im tryin to get this score up, because i took some damage when i first uploaded the beat

[some Anger]

Huh.

I liked the bassline; nice sound and melody. The drums were kinda weird, though - I'm cool with the panning, and the reverb to some of the drums was nice, but the kick didn't sound like a kick, but more like a fart. Overall, the drums didn't carry much power to them. The synth and other melodies, even though in the same key, just didn't match the bassline. 2 completely different moods. And the electric guitar doesn't work with the song. Other than that, though - cool song. Just work on it a little more.

Cebster responds:

haha just casue i like your songsw and score them high doesnt mean you have to do the same for me, by the looks of review i thought you would have given me like a 3 or something

[Dead Bodies (Slowed)]

Almost there

I like the low-fi feel of the song, but the drums are kinda lacking. The drums themselves are cool (the snap sounds great), but the drum pattern is just downright boring, and at times goes against the flow of the soundscape. I don't know; just work on it.
Also: I'll send you this beat I've been working on lately. Pretty soon.

[- Breathe -]

Cool

I liked those Japanese instruments you used right after the intro (intro was cool; nice and filtered) and that synth sounded like a pizzicato on steroids, although the melody with said Japanese instruments was a little weak. The drums were sweet, too - probably the focal point of the song. Then, in the middle, this cheesey, 80s synths tries to make a quick cameo and get famous, or something. That's like "Totally Awesome Song" by Greeksta-69 featuring, uh, some homeless guy off the street. If you took out that particular synth (replacing it with something way cooler, of course) and put more texture and ambience into the song, it would be dope. Peace.
- Ph. P

Greeksta-69 responds:

Damn i love these reviews, not mutch to say in reply but i appreciate you taking the time to listen and review it the way you heard it and i truly do appreciate that because we all listen to it defferently know what i mean? thanks alot man!

Greeksta

[The Dead Bodies]

Love the melody

That melody is endlessly beautiful; so serene and quaint. The drums leave a little to be desired, though. I would suggest you craft just a piano song - not a beat, just a piano song, with melodies and stuff. That should really accentuate your ability to create haunting soundscapes, like the one I'm hearing now. Also, experiment a little more. I hate to say it, but this beat sounds a lot like this other beat you did a few weeks back. A lot like it. You're kinda running into the late 90s Nine Inch Nails dilemma - creating variations in your music, but not progressions. Experimentation should really help you in progressing as a musician. Just mess around. Peace.
- Ph. P (new song - "Hangin' by the Beach")

TheGameReapa responds:

thanks for the comment, i do need to experiment a lot more, im still learning the fruity loops program so i havent really used alot of diffrent precussions and sounds and wut not.

[Yo Lo Soy(djsos)]

Cool

The orchestra/strings, synths, and drums are cool. There are some parts where distortion goes a tad far (beginning of the song, 1:28, etc.) but overall the song's pretty good. Next time, before uploading your song, try listening to your song through different kinds of speakers - headphones, computer speakers, even a car. Identify what could use fixing, and apply. Easy. Oh, and check out my new song, "Hangin' by the Beach." It's pretty good.

DJSOS202 responds:

lol i did the distortion on purpose...lol thx for the review and i will review it!

[Trancy Hop]

Not bad for a first song

I remember my song - wasn't even rhythmic. Just some drums and a sample copy-and-pasted in WavePad. No sequencer, no FL Studio - the horror. At least you have a stable start. The bass is sweet; sounds like one of the house setups for FL Slayer. Nice sound to it. The drums are cool, too - but the scratching was a tad scatalogical, and wore on me a little bit. Everything else was pretty good. Peace.
- Ph. P (New song - "Hangin' by the Beach")

[Lovesick--_--(2:24)]

Whoa, nice!

Your song almost makes me cry. Almost. Keep up the good work.
- Ph. P (Hangin' at the Beach; check out my songs)

[Young Breeze : R.I.P. DJ Ses]

Pretty good

Those gunshots kinda wore on me after a while, but everything else was pretty good. I like the samples; you were pullin' from all sorts of sources. What would be cool is if you got a ton of different records from different genres and combine them into some awesome beat. That would be cool, but this works, too. The only other thing that irritated me was the tag. You were playing that so much, you might as well have played it backwards. I'd much rather annoy my subconscious than my conscious, you know what I'm saying? But the beat's cool. Keep it up. Peace.
- Ph. P (Check out my songs)