Um...
...Sounds finished to me. I'd only fix the intro - a tad long, I'm talking about the part where the squirrels are praying. After that, sounds good, dude.
Um...
...Sounds finished to me. I'd only fix the intro - a tad long, I'm talking about the part where the squirrels are praying. After that, sounds good, dude.
Theirs only one verse, and squirrels? lol
Cool...
I love the intro. I think it needs more instruments, because you only have a squelchy bass and some drums, and when you want to drop something out to make the beat more interesting, you don't have too many places to turn. Also, drums by themselves tend to be quite boring, no matter how cool the rhythm (yes, you do have a nifty rhythm) At around 3:33, you brought in this bass which really should've been around earlier. It would've been cool if you toyed with that a little bit.
i havent really learned how to equalize stuff and am clueless about it :-/ hopefully ill learn with time ! TY for rating!
Cool.
I really like the drums. Normally, people use squishy drums, but you use nice, crunchy drums. Some of the synths are a bit too loud, though. Otherwise, it's nice. I like.
Magical 8-bit vst + Lower rendering quality for newgrounds = Every negative thing you said. haha
Really nice.
I like everything, except the drums. They could use some more oomph, you know? But the mood's great - sounds kinda like Radiohead a little bit. I like.
Hey thanks I really appreciate it. I think I will give that a try. BTW Radiohead is a large inspiration for me.
Cheers.
Uohmm.
I must say, I am liking this. The beat sounds excellent. The one thing I would change is that junky bouncy chord synth I heard in the beginning. The melody is great, but something smoother would fir the beat better. Everything else is really, I mean, really f-in' good. Keep up the good work!
ouch...junky...that hurts man...so is it just the beginning you don't like it? or all over?
Hmm.
Sounds more like Nine Inch Nails than dub. I hella like it, though. Nice use of samples, atmosphere, and drums. Good job!
yep, does sound a little NiNny. thanks for listening
;ped
Interesting
There's this clicky synth around 0:25 that doesn't match the rest of the song, but everything else sounds perfect. I like how you have the volume on the percussion really low. Cool song. Peace.
Hey thanks for the review! Yea that synth I put in as a subsitute for something else with a delay/key sound, will change on the next update, and lenghtier, thanks again!
Respect.
I have respect for anyone who can write a song. Damn.
(Check out my songs)
And how do you write like that?
Hey! Thanks a lot for the review, I almost thought I wouldn't get any (shame..)
On the writing part, ill usually pick out a key to play in and just go wild with it, its really just about expression for me, most of it is improvised. Sure ill be happy to check out some of your stuff, thanks again!
Cool
Kinda sounds like Massive Attack on the west coast; extremely creepy sounding. Awesome beat; peace.
yeea thaanks ya, west coast fo shou
Awesome.
Cheap FL Keys - I see what you mean.
Haha exactly..
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